Задание 38: письменное высказывание с элементами рассуждения на основе таблицы/диаграммы
Задание № 38 на ЕГЭ по английскому языку.
С 2022 года вместо задания «эссе» ЕГЭ по английскому языку пишем письменное высказывание с элементами рассуждения на основе таблицы/диаграммы.
Максимальный балл за задание - 14.
Рекомендуемое время выполнения - 60 минут.
Примерное задание 38
| Выберите только ОДНО из двух предложенных заданий (38.1 или 38.2), укажите его номер в БЛАНКЕ ОТВЕТОВ № 2 и выполните согласно данному плану. В ответе на задание 38 числительные пишите цифрами. |
| 38.1 | Imagine that you are doing a project on how teenagers relax after a busy day in Zetland. You have found some data on the subject – the results of the opinion polls (see the table below). Comment on the data in the table and give your opinion on the subject of the project. |
| Ways | Number of respondents (%) |
| Having a hobby | 38 |
| Spending time with friends | 31 |
| Sleeping | 15 |
| Walking in the open air | 10 |
| Eating tasty food | 6 |
Write 200–250 words.
Use the following plan:
- make an opening statement on the subject of the project;
- select and report 2–3 facts;
- make 1–2 comparisons where relevant and give your comments;
- outline a problem that can arise with having a rest and suggest a way of solving it;
- conclude by giving and explaining your opinion on the importance of relaxing well in our lives.
| 38.2 | Imagine that you are doing a project on why people in Zetland should study literature. You have found some data on the subject – the results оf the opinion polls (see the pie chart below). Comment on the data in the pie chart and give your opinion on the subject of the project. |
Write 200–250 words.
Use the following plan:
- make an opening statement on the subject of the project;
- select and report 2–3 facts;
- make 1–2 comparisons where relevant and give your comments;
- outline a problem that one can face studying literature and suggest a way of solving it;
- conclude by giving and explaining your opinion on the importance of studying literature.
Образец написания задания № 38 (выбран 38.1)
It is difficult to overestimate the importance of a good rest. I have chosen the project on how teenagers in Zetland relax after a busy day and found the data results of the opinion polls to give some of my ideas.
According to the table's results 38% of all respondents prefer being engaged in hobbies after a busy day, and delicious food is the least popular way of relaxing that only stands at 6% of teenagers' choice. Teenagers spend free time with their friends as well as sleep and walk in the fresh air to relax after a hard day.
One can see from the poll that spending time with friends (31% of surveyed) is almost twice as popular as sleeping, which is only 15 per cent, and almost three times more popular than walking in the fresh air chosen by 10%. It is an open secret that teenagers need enough time for communication in order to have social skills.
As we can see, there are several ways to relax for teenagers, and a problem with relaxation exists indeed. It's not always possible to distract from school and work reflexing on what has been done. I believe that going out and doing sports are the best ways to solve the problems as they can keep strong health and forget about current problems for a while.
I am convinced that relaxation is extremely important for everyone as it creates positive thinking and helps concentration and memory development.
Решение коммуникативной задачи (К-1: содержание текста)
Максимальные 3 балла за этот критерий можно получить, если:
- Проект написан в соответствии с темой.
- Проект написан по плану.
- Все пункты из таблицы/диаграммы указаны в работе.
- Количество слов соответствуют установленному лимиту.
- Используется нейтральный стиль.
Количество слов для максимального балла в задании - 200-250. Допустимо отклонение от заданного объема на 10%, то есть, от 180 до 275 слов. Если слов будет меньше 180, эксперт поставит 0 за решение коммуникативной задачи, а значит за всё задание №38 будет 0 баллов. Если в работе слов больше 275, эксперт отчеркнет 250-ое слово и дальше проверять не будет. То есть, если за 250 словами остались решение проблемы и заключение, они не будут засчитаны.
Под нейтральным стилем подразумевается отсутствие сокращений (I'm sure) и разговорной лексики (it is crazy to imagine... / Let's ...). Нельзя употреблять риторические вопросы.
Структура задания (К-2: организация текста)
Максимальные 3 балла за этот критерий можно получить, если:
- Проект правильно разделен на абзацы.
- написано логично и присутствуют средства логической связи.
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1. ВСТУПЛЕНИЕ (абзац № 1) It is difficult to overestimate the importance of a good rest. I have chosen the project on how teenagers in Zetland relax after a busy day and found the results of the opinion polls to give some of my ideas. Below I will give my comments on the data. КЛИШЕ:
2. 2-3 ГЛАВНЫХ ФАКТА (абзац № 2) According to the table's results, 38% of all respondents prefer being engaged in hobbies after a busy day, and delicious food is the least popular way of relaxing that only stands at 6% of teenagers' choice. Teenagers spend free time with their friends as well as sleep and walk in the fresh air to relax after a hard day. КЛИШЕ:
3. СРАВНЕНИЕ (абзац № 3) One can see from the poll that spending time with friends (31% of surveyed) is almost twice as popular as sleeping, which is only 15 per cent, and almost three times more popular than walking in the fresh air chosen by 10%. It is an open secret that teenagers need enough time for communication in order to have social skills. КЛИШЕ (сравнительные структуры):
КЛИШЕ (фразы для комментариев):
4. ПРОБЛЕМА + РЕШЕНИЕ (абзац № 4) As we can see, there are several ways to relax for teenagers, and a problem with relaxation exists indeed. It's not always possible to distract from school and work reflexing on what has been done. I believe that going out and doing sports are the best ways to solve the problems as they can keep strong health and forget about current problems for a while. КЛИШЕ:
5. ЗАКЛЮЧЕНИЕ + МНЕНИЕ (абзац № 5) I am convinced that relaxation is extremely important for everyone as it creates positive thinking and helps concentration and memory development. КЛИШЕ (выражения для подведения итогов):
КЛИШЕ (выражения своего мнения):
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